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The Gift by Freida McFadden Review

A Short Story

By Freida McFadden

3.0out of 5

Editorial score · Mixed

Stella's Christmas Eve bargain got me curious right away. I enjoyed the story while it was moving, but I could see too much coming, and some of what did surprise me felt arranged for the twist.

Best forIt fits an afternoon if you're in the mood for straightforward suspense. The appeal is the speed and the initial predicament. The characters stay thin, and the mystery offers little to puzzle over afterward.

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Pace
Fast
Darkness
Moderate
Romance
Minimal
Difficulty
Accessible

Should you read The Gift?

What works

The cost of a Christmas present is a real problem for Stella. I wanted to see how far she would go to give Justin something. That question gives the pawnshop owner's proposal its pull.

What may not work for you

I could follow Stella's desperation. Some of her decisions after the offer make less sense. I saw several turns coming, and a few that caught me off guard still depended on choices I had trouble believing.

Does the ending reward the effort?

The ending settles the main conflict, but its big turn feels forced. The resolution needs too many things to fall neatly into place, and I found the payoff less satisfying than the setup.

Reading The Gift closely

Stella Hansen works two jobs and still can't afford a Christmas gift for Justin, her husband. On Christmas Eve, a pawnshop owner offers her a trade.

Stella and the bargain

Stella is the one I wanted to follow. Justin gives her a reason to look for the gift, and the pawnshop owner gets to set the terms. I wanted more of those two than their parts in the transaction. Neither gets enough room to feel as distinct as Stella.

What Christmas brings to the story

The idea of giving something up to get a present comes from O. Henry's The Gift of the Magi. Christmas Eve gives Stella a deadline and makes one small purchase feel like a test. I felt that pressure more than I felt the season. Once the trade takes over, the holiday mostly stays in the background.

Where it fits in McFadden's work

The financial pressure also drives The Housemaid, where a live-in job gives the danger an entire household to grow in. Never Lie has more space to complicate its mystery through a therapist's recordings. The Gift concentrates on one transaction. The Freida McFadden reading guide puts it alongside her other short fiction.

Original publication
U.S. reissue
Review
Published
Reviewed by
Leon Bossasi
Genres & moods
ThrillerPsychological ThrillerDomestic Thriller
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